Oh, I'm sorry if you were looking for me Lou Lou! I think that both of your stories were great, but I decided against posting a leaderboard because people would fell inclined to edit their stories. Also, I am deciding how to react to Cindy's double entry, which was not permitted. My comments on your story Lou Lou, was that it was very funny and original. At the moment I have no comment on Cindy's work. Keep Writing!
Your Friend, AbsoluteOwl