+11 votes
259 views
in Fiction by (110k points)

The fin was cutting in a familiar manner that I KNEW, would scare even 
the toughest of souls. Natali was all out of wack. The Velcro safety 
strap hung loosely around my ankle.

    Confusion circulated in my head more than fear. It was THAT DAY all over again. I felt bloated. And sweaty. And it was to the point 
that I didn't know what I was going to do with myself.

WAS I crazy? Or was I just STUPID? These thoughts consumed me from 
the inside out as I pondered on what to do next. "Umm..we come in 
peace!" I blurted out, half-expecting for a response. "Why are you 
talking to a shark, Lia?! That thing could kill you!" Natali screeched, 
staring and slowly advancing backwards on her  board.

    "Yeah, Gnat. It could've /also/ killed me that day, too. But ya know 
what? /It didn't/. I think this thing has some unfinished business with 
me and I wanna figure out why." I said bravely, paddling closer to the 
aquatic beast. "It's just too /risky/, Lia!" Natali cried, tugging on my arm.

   "Besides; you don't think it actually knows, who you are, and what 
its business with you is. Do you?" I stared at the paralyzing creature, 
puzzled with the situation.

    "Well what am I supposed to do here, Natali?" I asked, genuinely 
confused. How, am I just going to leave this situation at this rate? I 
was /just /getting over it, and now it's blowing up in my face once 
again!" "Lia, I feel you. I don't understand any of this either, but 
it's getting late. We have to get ho--," she

    cut off. "What's wrong?" I asked. I followed her gaze into the water 
where the shark used to be. "It's...gone."


TO BE CONTINUED

Chapter Six: http://www.kidzsearch.com/questions/12478/shark-bait-ch6?show=12478#q12478

Next Chapter: http://www.kidzsearch.com/questions/13405/shark-bait-ch8-wow-these-are-going-by-fast?show=13405#q13405

 




1 Answer

+1 vote
by
 
Best answer
I LOVE IT! its so suspenseful!
by (110k points)
Thank you! The chapter 8 will be posted on Saturday ;)
by (3.2k points)
I am behind schedule. This will actually be posted hopefully today (9/5/16), or possibly Tuesday, because things have been very busy lately with school returning on us! ;P



Related questions

+11 votes
1 answer 332 views
asked Feb 28, 2016 in Fiction by rae (110k points)
+9 votes
1 answer 471 views
asked Sep 5, 2016 in Fiction by SnoWolfPretzelz (3.2k points)
+14 votes
2 answers 304 views
+14 votes
0 answers 266 views
asked Jul 22, 2016 in Fiction by rae (110k points)
+10 votes
1 answer 341 views
asked Apr 2, 2016 in Fiction by rae (110k points)
+12 votes
3 answers 590 views
asked Dec 21, 2015 in Fiction by rae (110k points)
+11 votes
1 answer 521 views
asked Oct 22, 2016 in Fiction by SnoWolfPretzelz (3.2k points)
+14 votes
0 answers 278 views
asked Oct 20, 2016 in Fiction by rae (110k points)
+13 votes
1 answer 224 views
asked Sep 21, 2016 in Fiction by rae (110k points)
+13 votes
0 answers 314 views
asked Jun 4, 2016 in Fiction by rae (110k points)
+13 votes
2 answers 334 views
+10 votes
2 answers 193 views
+7 votes
0 answers 166 views
+3 votes
2 answers 30 views
+14 votes
1 answer 228 views
+9 votes
3 answers 58 views
asked Jan 8 in Other by GravityCentered (148k points)
+7 votes
1 answer 129 views
+4 votes
0 answers 36 views
+7 votes
1 answer 231 views
asked Apr 13, 2017 in Science by anonymous

Recent Badges

Notable Question
Asked question received 50 views
- SHATTEREDSTARR<3 -
Good Question
Question received +3 upvote
- -Mel_Twilight- -
Popular Question
Asked question received 100 views
- akari -
Notable Question
Asked question received 50 views
- SLaY2231 -
Nice Question
Question received +2 upvote
- Esie -
...