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Ext. Gun Shop-Day

In the small town of Stevensville, Montana, a gun shop's bright, red light shines like a fire.

Gun Shop-Manufacturing Room-Day

                           Dissolve To:

Employees work hard to fill an order.

Jake, famous outdoors man, 20s and not getting younger coughs a little

                 Jake

     Are ya'll work'n hard?

A young hunter, 17 looks at the best gun in the shop made by Alex D.

         Young Hunter

WOW! Alex is great at making guns.

              Jake

You sir are totally right. Alex has been making guns for years.

A shot rings out. Jake goes to the Testing Room and closes the door.

               Jake

Can we please keep this the door closed?

         Young Hunter

I better get back home for chores. Oh and I love the store.

 

      End Play




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