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There is a prophecy that speaks of a wyvern Rat of the flames. Only one fits this description of what the prophecy says, and she is not a hero, nor a villain. Honestly, I don't know what her role will be. The others she will meet is obscured by the already lingering darkness. This darkness is unlike most. It preys on fear, but never dies. It will live, and live on until the end of time.
But it can be kept at bay.
Now it has come back to terrorize Oati, our world, and only the wyvern rat can help them chain it again.
Her name is Galaxyi.
"Galaxyi," said Attayi, his black fur ruffled and his eyes fixed on his sister. 
"What, Attayi?" Galaxyi snapped, stretching her silver wings. They were tense against her pitch black pelt. 
"Time to get back to the Hellhole," Attayi replied coolly. The river flowed beside them, the sky was grey, and the wind was blowing gently into the lush forest on their right. Attayi gestured to the cliffs ahead of them.
Galaxyi sighed, and the two wyrats walked on to the cliffs. Keeping the cliffs on their right, and the river on their left, they scrambled along the trail until they reached a tunnel on the cliff face. It was alive with dancing flames.
"You first." Attayi said.
Galaxyi bounded through the Flame Canal. She emerged in a rocky hollow. Attayi came in behind her, and they both nodded to one of the three Harts. The Hart then jumped down and approached Galaxyi.
"Hello Sadu," said Attayi, dipping his head.
Sadu glared at him. "Back to battle training, Attayi." When Attayi left and jumped up the hollow's cliff walls to the top, Sadu turned to Galaxyi. "When is your nestmoon."
"Tonight Is the birth."
Sadu nodded. "Hax and Sazi- the other Harts-, their herds, are due tonight."
Galaxyi thought about the other fourth females, all divided into three herds so they could give birth to kits.
And the kits couldn't fly because their wings were broken, as where all the Hellhole rats.
 

HOW TO SAY THE NAMES

Galaxyi: Gal-a-zee.

Attayi: At-tit-i.

Sadu: Sa-doo

(EDIT: Making new version that will be longer and give more info on the Rat world. Stay tuned. Hax and Sazi's names will be changed! Will be done within the month. I was writing it but it glitched and I lost my work.

 

 




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I love it already! Can't wait for the next chapter! The best part about your books are the details and the action
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Awww, thanks ViVi! I love your book as well.



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