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Silens I


We all are lost, but some of us find our way out. 


It wasn't always that Asia would be this skinny, this pale.

She had been different from that day, but honestly, what did I expect? I would too. It's physically and emotional pain. Handison is an evil man, that's what he does, torment, hate-he hates life. Life that have meaning. Because he sucks it out of them to be like him, nothing, a problem to all humanity.

"Alright then, mate, I'm going to test this out!" Lucas excited tries his muggle object he found in a muggle shop. I didn't understand it, but if it worked, okay then.  It started spinning around, making bubbles and confetti pop out. "See, I told you!" he yelled.

"Okay?" I rolled my eyes at him.

"Oh c'mon! It's cool right?" he answered to my dullness.

"Okay, fine, it's alright. But it's muggle, you never know what they've done to that." I joked at the last part of my sentence. "I bet it's, hmm, POISON!" he yelped. I was startled. "Don't do that again!" I sighed afterwards. "Let's go find Willow and Hazyl," said Lucas. "To see how Asia's doing?" he asked. "Yep! I can't wait to see her improvement. I bought her some flowers from that same muggle shop."

"All lovey-dovey huh?" I laughed.

"I guess." Then we both went to find Willow, Asia and Hazyl. We saw them all on the couch, talking. "Hello Girls!" said Lucas, using ‘girls' the most cringe worthiest way ever. "Hey," I said to the three of them. "Hello Tom and Lucas." Asia smiled.

Then it hit me.

Asia's going to die soon. Handison is right. She going to die. But what he understands is I don't care about that. I'm going to die, Lucas is going to die, so that doesn't matter. It never did, and it never will. Once you have finished your deed on Earth, you must move on to the next stage of life. I looked at Asia's face as her smile lit the room.

"I'm glad you're feeling better," I said to her.

"Thanks, Lucas!" she said back.

Hazyl seemed like she was hiding something. It was something I didn't know. Willow was hiding something too, from all of us, but that didn't matter. It was what Hazyl hid that really hit me. She seemed it was something important. Though, Asia seemed like she was hiding something too. Maybe something had happened, or happening, and I didn't notice?


Sorry it's short!




1 Answer

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by (350k points)
Grrrr. I like the chapter, Knight, but I didn't write the one you went off of, it was someone else, a poser. This was actually where I was planning to go with the story (Asia starting to get sick) but MUCH later, like when she hit 20. She's still 16/17 RN, so whoever made the chapter didn't do his/her research. Quit impersonating me. I've had so many people do it it's made me mad and made me lose track.
by (415k points)
Okay! I didn't really go off of what the other chapter was, because I was CONFUSED. So, I just pretended like the other chapter didn't exist. I agree people should NOT try to be other people. It caught me off guard.
by (350k points)
Yeah. BTW, you can keep this chapter, just rename it as Chapter 4 or something, unless you wanna write a new one. Thanks ;D
by (415k points)
Okay! I will!



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