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First, what I thought about each story -

LLM's entry- Good moral of the story, good use of descriptive language, could use more work towards creating a bigger problem and solution. But overall, a good story.

BGPearl's entry- Great job on the story, good use of descriptive language, as well as using italics for thinking, not too much for moral, but it remind me more of a story with a jack (the one character who uses logic and always lucky). Overall, great story.

KnightStar's entry- Great job on descriptive language, not much for story or moral. Overall an okay story.

Gemhearts entry- Great job on descriptive language, good as a story, not much for moral but since it was a scary story they often don't have one. Good use of an urban legend, little bit off for the theme given though. Overall, a good story.

 

Rankings.

 

1st. BGPearl's entry

2nd. Gemhearts entry

3rd. LLM's entry.

4th. KnightStar's entry.
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Thank you! ;)



2 Answers

+1 vote
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I don't contests who rank writing. The fact that people even entered is amazing so don't discourage people by ranking their stories. It's very subjective
by (165k points)
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I was not trying to say anything discouraging, and I tried to say somethin good about each story. And it is a contest, it has to have a winner or else it isn't a contest. I liked all of the stories, and it isn't like I was saying everyone did terrible or anything.
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+1 vote
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Thanks for the completements! I wasn't trying to make a story with a bg proplem. Just a fluffy little story people would maybe use to teach kids a lesson. Good job to everyone. Can't wait for next theme so I can get started! :) LLM



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