+10 votes
339 views
in Poetry by (415k points)


FRESH LIKE THE LEMON SEA—rattled to the point the bird could sing no more, it’s lungs out of hope, it’s heart out of breath in which it had beat no more.

And which it had been apart. Apart from its soulmate in dire need for the bird the set it’s blue winds, to ride the winds, which was a stormy array.

And yet, everything around him would seem like a desert—the berries laid were blood-like, colored and plump, it was everything he had desired for. Mourned for; wished for in every urgent need.

Yet, his lover, a bird whose would fly days to find him, he had to retreat.

Because, a man whose bird needed to lead a family. Yet, whose was not sure if he would make it out of the storm, it was ever too cold.

Oh, how would the bird ever conform his resurgence? He didn’t want to be away from his shining lover, whose songs were draw him back to his nest, that had laid below the berry tree.

Oh, dear me!

Of course, his wings were frozen, a statue they were. His eyes closed shut, and his midnight black beak quivered.

He was indeed perfect dinner.




2 Answers

+1 vote
by (1.34m points)
nice poem
+3 votes
by (153k points)
I love this poem! Normally my poems are kinda short, I’ve been thinking about posting them. One of them, I got into the Young Pegasus, and another I got into a national book of poetry! It’s called Illustrious. The book. not my poem. My poem is called Friendship.
by (415k points)
Your poem sounds awesome!!! id love to read it ;)
by (153k points)
+1
thanks! My next post I’ll do of my poems I also have a post i already posted with some. I can’t do links, because KidzSearch is my browser and not Google, but it’s called Poetry Helps Me Express My Feelings.



Related questions

+15 votes
8 answers 683 views
+9 votes
1 answer 407 views
asked Jan 10, 2017 in Other by L (90.2k points)
+5 votes
1 answer 118 views
+13 votes
2 answers 338 views
+6 votes
1 answer 204 views
asked Mar 15, 2021 in Poetry by LunaLight (165k points)
+8 votes
1 answer 274 views
asked Feb 11, 2020 in Poetry by lunalovegoodmolly (375k points)
+9 votes
1 answer 219 views
asked Feb 6, 2020 in Poetry by lunalovegoodmolly (375k points)
+8 votes
3 answers 332 views
asked Feb 4, 2020 in Poetry by Jello789 (1.9k points)
+9 votes
2 answers 365 views
asked Nov 10, 2019 in Poetry by jazzlinny (45.3k points)
+9 votes
1 answer 169 views
asked Jun 9, 2016 in Poetry by anonymous
+14 votes
0 answers 160 views
asked Apr 29, 2016 in Poetry by ❤️GryffindorGal❤️ (134k points)
+13 votes
1 answer 323 views
asked Mar 30, 2016 in Poetry by Cindy7872 AJ (38.6k points)
+13 votes
1 answer 229 views
asked Mar 21, 2016 in Poetry by FuzzyFuzz
+8 votes
3 answers 267 views
asked Feb 7, 2016 in Poetry by fuzzyfuzz
+8 votes
1 answer 231 views
asked Feb 2, 2016 in Poetry by Lou Lou
+6 votes
1 answer 43 views
+3 votes
3 answers 88 views
asked Feb 2, 2023 in Science by MAHILINI
+2 votes
2 answers 205 views
+9 votes
6 answers 411 views
asked Feb 17, 2020 in star's blog by im kanye (415k points)
+6 votes
5 answers 82 views
asked Apr 24, 2023 in Pets / Animals by Playpuppy2000
+3 votes
5 answers 121 views
asked Jun 10, 2022 in Pets / Animals by Phoenix

Recent Badges

Notable Question
Asked question received 50 views
- Hyude -
Notable Question
Asked question received 50 views
- ThatOneRainbowWorm -
Notable Question
Asked question received 50 views
- Greenflare4life -
Nice Question
Question received +2 upvote
- Esie -
Nice Comment
Comment received +2 upvote
- nobodyimportant -
...