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Chapter 7

Steve

"Charli, I'll try to teach you how to swim, okay?" Charli nodded taking off his shirt. I feel the need to poke him. He giggles. "Shh... The others are asleep, you know what happens when you know who wakes up." Charli frowns. "Charli, do you want to get some breakfast at least?" "no." We jump into the open ocean, suddenly I spot something. The Eiffel Tower. We're washing up into France. The city of love. My eyes blur. A tear drops from my eye. Don't let him see you cry. I direct him back inside the plane. I go over under the control area and sob. I see Charli poking maya. No. No. She wakes up, and frowns. She spots me. Rolling her eyes she turns away. Good for her. Anger is building. I don't know who to be mad at. We hit the shores. I yell "WERE IN FRANCE" Charli smacks Me in the face. Then walks over to Maya and smacks Maya on her forehead and has a tantrum of screaming "STOP IT! STOP IT RIGHT NOW! LOVE EACH OTHRR NOW!" He pushes me towards Maya and squishes our faces together. "KISS NOW!" Mara is laughing and clapping and repeating "Future Couples Doctor". Maya attempts to not smile. And suddenly she pouches me in the face. Everything is a blur. I fall on the ground. The last thing I here is "NO!"



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