try rewriting it like this:
Sometimes when it's hard
When no one listens (hold)
But you got to live with it!
Because that's the way of life
Sometimes it's sad when everyone's cryin'
but you got to,
Help them up!
because their not tryin'
and you got to tell them that their not dyin'
BUT YOU GOT TO LIVE WITH IT!
cause that's the way of life.(hold "i")
it looks more pro this way. good song though! also make it a little longer, a short song is like a cliffhanger on a book. try this format:
intro
refrain
verse 1
refrain
interlude
verse 2
refrain
interlude
coda