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I looked around at the big room, with the king and queen staring at me. A sudden feeling of guilt overcame me, as the opened their mouths.

"How dare you do this to us, betray us!" she yelled, as I felt anger and guilt control my feeling. "Sorry you majesty," I said, on my knees for forgiveness

"You really think your going to get away with this, you foolish child!" The King looked to the other strong knights, calling them to put me in a cell.

"I'm sorry!" I yelled, as they pulled me away from the Queen and King's disappointment.

After being painfully tugged in the castles halls, we finally arrived to my cell. It was dusty and dark, as I could hear screams from every corner.

I bundled up, as the other knights, my friends, left me for dead. "I'm sorry" I whispered to myself, but not even I could hear the word "sorry" mummer from my mouth.

As all hope was lost, as I heard steps come down to the dungeon.

Surprised, I saw the princess. With long brown hair, and stormy grey eyes, she was a real princess. Although, it confused me why she was down here.

She looked at me in worry in h eyes, as she headed over to me. "Hello Arnold," she said, with keys dangling from her pockets.

"I'm here to set you free" She said.

I guess hope wasn't lost after all. "Great!" I stumbled. Barely anyone saw the princess, was always isolated and locked up in her room, studying.

"Okay, let's go," she said, walking silently. My shoes made loud noises, which caused her to shush me.

"Where are we going exactly?" I asked, as she sighed. "A secret place. More like a garden." She said.

After walking the halls, we finally made it silently outside. The gardens were amazing, but the princess looked unimpressed.

"Not here," she said, pushing me over to a wall.

She touched the wall, causing it to open widely. "Here" she said.

It was the most amazing thing I've ever seen. With many varieties of flowers, and picnic tables, and birds chirping.

 

I woke up.

I was alone, in a room. My old room from when I was a child, for I was really poor then. So, my room was always dusty, as my parents would always leave.

 

I hoped you liked it Luna Midnight!!!



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