to gemmy and knight and no one else (it is about astell)

Question

i am making another song for astell. i want your advise and suggestions.here is part of it:

Both: You and me, were a catastrophe

Luna: I let the demon's inside

Shadow: They would no longer hide

Luna: They rose and clouded my mind

Shadow: It's not your fault they got inside.

Answer 1

I never really became a big fan of MLP tho I do remember  what it was about, I do like this tho!

Answer 2

Great job! I think this great!!!