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Sorry if this is a little late! Ammy K only participated, so she wins. Here is her story:

In the Palm of Darkness's Hand

Ezziline held her breath as her family's vehicle skyrocketed at top speed and threatened to throw them out at any second. 

"Father!" She yelled above the rumbling engine. Ezzeline, who was also called Izzy, had to shout his name several more times before he finally heard her. 

"Yes, dearest?" was the reply. 

"How much longer must we do this?" Izzy pushed threw a scrap of torn paper that had become stuck to her hair off the edge of the flyer and into the strong wind. 

"Well-" when her husband failed to finish his sentence, Sylvia, Ezzeline's mother, responded that they weren't sure. 

"But we will stop soon, I promise, honey." A moment that would have been silent, if not for the wind, passed before Sylvia elbowed Wynfred and harshly informed him that she meant he should land now

"I-I didn't know!" he defended himself weakly. "Now darling, you can't expect me to just-just, well, you know what I mean." His wife obviously didn't, judging by the indignant look on her face. 

Ezzeline sighed and pulled out her photo tiny album and began flipping through it and nearly tearing up when she saw a picture of her and her best friend, Stella, standing next to each other and laughing. Life had been so much easier then. Izzy was about to ask her father if she would ever see her friends again, when she realized that Wynfred was completely turned around, arguing with Sylvia, and neither of them had notice that they were heading straight at a huge green storage building. 

"Look out!" Izzy screamed, but it was too late.

Thank you and I hope you all had fun omgomg




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