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this one morning i woke up and i was invisible for a day
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Beautiful start
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"I gazed at the magic show with my mind racing. I wish I could be invisible for a day, i tbought dully as the magician waved his long black wand.

'I need a volunteer!' Shouted the magician joyfully.

I raised my hand high. " Me, me!" I yelped excitedly.

'Hm.' The magician tapped his chin, and then pointed to me with his wand. 'Let's take the young lady* down there!'

(*= or man/lad for a boy)

I smiled and walked up the stage's hard steps, where the magician directed me to a large wooden box. 'Go in there,' he whispered, turning back to his audience.

As I stepped into the upright wooden box, I knew what was going to happen. The door of the box was going to close, and then the floor underneath my feet was going to drop into a cellar, and there I would stay until the magician elevated the floor again, announced me OK, and let me leave.

Then the magician shut the door like I had predicted. But then, with a whooshing sound, a green mist sparkled over me.I gazed down at my feet- and saw they were gone!

'What!' I said in horror.

The door opened again.

'Now I will make her reappear! ' declared the magician, and the door swung shut again.

I waited, biting my lip, until the door was wrenched open by the magician. His eyes were wide as he stared, dumbfounded, at me. I was invisible- he  couldn't see or hear me. I ducked beneath his arm, and charged into the crowd of onlookers. No one saw me pass, not even my parents.

I was invisible. And I didn't know if I would ever reappear again."

Hope that helps! You could even call this chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For"!

 

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Sooooo good! Your name is Gem Heart now, right?
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I went to the story and I sall a bag of chips,but I coundn,t buy
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i would say "if i could be invisible for a day i would..."
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Start it with a question or with disconfidence. It will get the reader hooked.

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I'll give a thumbs Up
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What? Just write what comes to mind first.



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