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Every day unsuspecting people go off to work, for money so that they can “survive”-- make a “difference”, in this world. Every day these individuals leave their most valuable possessions in the hands of strangers, who claim to be trustworthy.Don’t believe me? Fine. I’ll give you some examples.Parents leave their vulnerable children at daycares with people they’ve never met. For a fee.People leave their life savings at a bank with the bank teller.For a fee.Stores fail to keep their word on a “deal or bundle” that customers have bought. For a fee.You see, the reality is that people don’t change.It’s all a pattern.No matter how many times they make a mistake, and supposedly “change” for the better -- they always make more mistakes. And when changing doesn’t work, they make others change for them.But the question is, who do they make change? And is it for the better?

 

“We can’t leave Indigo”

                                                         “We have to… It’s for the best Gwennie….”

 

“BUT She’s our SISTER!

She’s all we have and-”                

                                                           “--And We’re all she has. I know, I know.

                                                         But we can’t keep running--not anymore.I’m sorry

                                                              Gwennie”  

“YOU’RE BEING SO UNFAIR!

THIS ISN’T YOU, OASIS”                     “DON’T CALL ME THAT”


 

“NO. I WON'T STOP. ALL THESE YEARS,

AND YOU STILL CAN’T BEAR TO HEAR YOUR
OWN NAME?!”                                                                  

                                                                              “That- That’s not my name. My name is Jonas.”

“KEEP LYING TO YOURSELF!”       

                                                                               “It’s not a lie.It’s all true”

“Heh. That figures. You are such a coward.

You don’t even realize that this is all a lie,

A fabrication, a mural of deception.Listen.

She’s dead Oasis... She’s gone. ” 

                                                                                “.....Okay.”

 
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