His worried look alarmed me . He was my Grandfather . He shouldn't be alarmed easily. Something was clearly wrong.
Time stood still, for what felt like forever .
"Linny, " He ordered " You need to come with me ." I knew he was serious ,but what would Miss Woods say ? "Where are you going?" I asked trying to hide my fear . " You know I have to go ----Miss woods will want me back. In fact.... I stopped it was useless to argue especially when it comes to my grandfather.
" Linny ."he said again," I don't have time to explain even now it might be to late" His Brown eyes filled with concern and care, looked at me . I suddenly blurted Loads Questions right then. "I told you I don't have time to explain" He said.
Suddenly, A young man , wearing a faded vest, White Shirt, and A black Hat, Strutted right on in the shop. He stopped at a Shelf full of odd and old Plates, Tapping his shaven chin.
"Thomas , go take Linny out back " Grandfather said pointing to the door behind the counter. The whole time Thomas was just standing by the wall behind the counter listening to us. "I'll go take this ---Customer" he said.
He took me by the hand so Quickly I didn't realize we were going already. "Ow , You didn't have to hurt me ! " I said . He turned his face towards me and with a weird expression on his face he laughed "Sorry ,but you really got to be more alert ."
" So this was the backroom"I thought. That room was filled with Junk ...well not junk ,but it Looked like junk . A Tiny Lightbulb was the only light in this room. Nails and planks were all over place ,filling the room with a woody odor .
He took his grip of my hand and carefully tiptoed into the rooms junk pile. "You coming?" He asked " Careful not to knock down some of this . we don't want Walter knowing we're here " Walter ?" I asked . "Not right now "he whispered. He pointed to a tunnel made out of Knick knacks,and motioned me to go in it. I peaked in seeing where it led ,but all I could see was a dark abyss.
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