Song writing contest!!!! Join or youll regret it!!

Question

Ok so this contest is for song writers everywhere!. But poetry is also allowed! Deadline is February 1st.

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Comments

I'm not the best at songwriting but I'll try!!! :)

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Title: Why?

Writter: Conley Clark

Date: January 18th 2023 Wednesday

Inspiration: Olivia Rodrigo

You said said you cared,

You said you loved,

You said there's no-one better,

But why did you leave me if you promised you would always love me?

Why,

Whyyyy

Why did you leave me?

Maybe you lied, you hated me to death,

Or maybe you couldn't of cared less.

I don't know why,

Whyyyy?

Why?

You said you cared

You said you loved,

But why did you leave me if you promised you would always love me?

(Love me)

Whyyyyyyy? why?

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         Have you ever wished that you could fall into my arms and fall in with me God can give you some wings and learn to fly we could be just like doves in the sky we are loving and caring all that we need to know about eachother cause we gotta gotta belive in us cause you  love that attention so don't shut me out or gost me because I'm more than what you you think I know that you know we gotta keep our secrets confidential cause you you YOUUU baby  yeah I just want you to know-ooh that your the world to me and know that I would never ever expose you cause I dont want you to be physically emotionally thinkin about leaving me so i gotta know if you've ever wished that you and I could be flamengos or swans wrapping our necks together forever and making hearts we can kiss we can touch makin each one of us feel like we matter cause my heart sinks in to your perfect melodies I wanted you to concor your fears right here and right now wit you body shame cause you know I don't think or care at all wishin I could think your body all night Oh ohh oh have you ever wished you can stop time and feel like the only one that matters cause seeing you shine in the moonlight and for one second feel beautiful thing in the night sky don't you ever wished

genre:pop

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Wow! That's a very good song! I love it! It sounds professional!

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Thx I've written songs since I was 5

Answer 1

A song I wrote a couple of months ago

The Cowboy Hat (link)

Answer 2

Why am I doing this? Vagabonds like music, as we all know. It's an old hippie thing that's just kind of stuck.

Johnny I Took Your Soul

We were huntin' boys, we were fightin' boys, in our patched uniforms of blue...

We marched, we rode, we swam, oh, we ran the forest through...

Our Spencer's were new and our blood was young,

Younger than we ever knew...

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul.

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul, oh 

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul.

We went in the fields oh Johnny-- your gray jacket matched the mornin' dew...

We went in the fields but oh Johnny I swear, my first shots weren't at you.

When first I saw your poor scared, it took me several tries to 

Remember just where I was and why...

Then slowly, by and by, I, realized that my dream of servin' my flag was a lie.

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul.

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul.

Ten times did I load my musket, once did I make my shot.

Oh Johnny that...just so happened...to the bullet that 'chou caught.

I saw that round pierce your heart, a skinny gray oak and a silver-tipped dart...

I saw that found pierce your heart, a skinny gray oak and a silver-tipped dart.

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul.

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul.

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul,

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life, oh Johnny I took your soul.

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life...oh Johnny I took your soul. 

Comments

Wow! That's great! Definitely one of the probably winners!

Answer 3

You promised you stay but then you leave

I wish I meant something to you

Your promise means nothing to me

But what else can I do

I've tried my hardest

To be the best person to you

Just for you to leave me broken

Heart split in two

Don't come back to me

Asking if I'm alright

Yet it was you who caused the damage

I don't wanna be hurt this time

I was always left out

I said I was fine

You don't know me

Don't say you love me then say goodbye

I wish you loved me

Because I love you so

You can say it but it's hard to believe

Because your love is all I've ever known

Sooo it's kinda a sad song but it's about my friends and how I'm kinda left out but I have no one else

Comments

I wish you loved me

Because I love you so

This has got to be the most relatable line in the whole song for me. 

And

I said I was fine

That. This song is incredibly relatable... I hope your situation gets better :D

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Wow nice

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Thanks!

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OH MY GOSH!!!!! That is a wonderful,beautiful,and moving song!! Better than any of my songs!

Answer 4

i guess but where?

Answer 5

                       Ever wished

         Have you ever wished that you could fall into my arms and fall in with me God can give you some wings and learn to fly we could be just like doves in the sky we are loving and caring all that we need to know about eachother cause we gotta gotta belive in us cause you I love that attention so don't shut me out or gost me because I'm more than what you you think I know that you know we gotta keep our secrets confidential cause you you YOUUU baby boy or girl whoever comes to me meeee meeeeeee yeahhh I just want you to know-ooh that your the world to me and know that I would never ever expose you cause I dont want you to be physically emotionally thinkin about leaving me so i gotta know if you've ever wished that you and I could be flamengos or swans wrapping our necks together forever and making hearts we can kiss we can touch makin each one of us feel like we matter cause my heart sinks in to your perfect melodies I wanted you to concor your fears right here and right now wit you body shame cause you know I don't think or care at all wishin I could think your body all night Oh ohh oh have you ever wished you can stop time and feel like the only one that matters cause seeing you shine in the moonlight and for one second feel beautiful thing in the night sky don't you ever wished

genre:pop

Writer: Zoe 

Writers age:16 

Comments

we have some unimaginable talent over here!!!