Heartache (a haiku)

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asked Nov 30, 2023 in Poetry by akari (71.3k points)

Heartache (A haiku)

If it were a dream

False memory of you

But it's all too real.

In love once, but wrong

Believed you were the true one

Lies shattered my heart

Why did you do this?

Our perfection, now alone

Heartbroken, I am.

haiku
❤❤❤
☺☺☺

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3 Answers

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answered Dec 5, 2023 by Potato Life

MADE ME CRY... <3 real, real good!!

commented Dec 5, 2023 by akari (71.3k points)

thanks!! :D

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answered Nov 30, 2023 by ~GrlPWR4Eva~ (188k points)

Its so beautiful

Its so awesome :DD

commented Nov 30, 2023 by akari (71.3k points)

thx!

commented Dec 1, 2023 by ~GrlPWR4Eva~ (188k points)

Yw!

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answered Nov 30, 2023 by ThatOneShreddedGuy (116k points)

nice. I have a whole notebook of haikus I wrote.

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