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chapter 1

Dear diary  

my name is Lola I'm 11 I live in Vancouver and in three days I'm  gonna start middle school  Im exited and a little nervous at the same time I wonder how middle school will be and if I'll still have  a lot of friends like in my old school what I'm really annoyed about is my best friend Clara is going to a different middle school  I tryed convincing my parents to put me in my best friend Clara's school but they said that I can't because her school is farther and the middle school I'm going to is really close to my house oh I gotta go I'm going back to school shopping with my best friend Clara 

"heyyy Clara"

 "hi Lola are you exited to go back to school shopping"  

 "Yeah I am but I really wish we where going to the same school" said Lola 

"yeah I do to but we can still always see each other after school" Clara said 

The two girls took the bus to the mall they where looking for the right outfits for middle school 

They both bought a pair of black stretch pants and a pair of grey stretch pants 

Clara bought a blue tang top dress that was a little over her knees and a pair of blue high heels to go with it she also bought short black shorts and a white tee shirt  with white sneakers 

Lola bought a pink crop top with short white shorts and a light purple skirt with a black tangtop 

And she bought pink high heels and white sneakers 

They bought so much stuff each girl had four huge bags one mostly with jeans and crop tops and tang tops the other with skirts and dresses the other with stretch pants and shorts the other with shoes and they each had three small bags of jewelry when they where finished they went to the food court and bought a burger and pop each later when they where finished they took the bus back Lola got of the bus cause her stop was first the two girls said bye to each other it was already dark she hurried to her house when she got to her house she saw her mom and dad in the living room watching tv "hello dear do you want to watch something with me" Lola's mom asked " no I'm tired cause of shopping so much I'm gonna sleep" Lola said to her mom her 6 year old sister was already asleep Lola walked upstairs with her bags and whent to her room she got ready for bed and whent to sleep.

Tell me if you like it




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AGHHHHH ITS ME! MY NAME IS CLARA!!!
by (4.9k points)
He he he your in the story
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Its good its just you should probrably fix the errors you have because you mispelled a couple   words. Is this actually a true story though?? Just you made it into a book series?
by (4.9k points)
Oh ok thanks for telling me no it's not I just made it up
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No problem! and ohhh okay lol I should of realized that
by
No problem! and ohhh okay lol I should of realized that



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