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Chapter one: What?!

  "So your saying he's just dead? No clues as to why?" I asked Barrnet. He shook his head no. It was odd. Crimes like this don't just happen in Cassideana,  Oakland. Especially not in the RIDGES. The RIDGES are a complete town far out, about a hour from Trinty. The town wasn't even on the map, let alone even classified as a city, it was just there. Population is about 1,000. We like to say we are a state, but we won't be classified as one. Are neighborhoods aren't tight and up close like the ones in Trinty. You see one neighborhood, drive for a few more miles you see another. We are very shy people, but we can run off someone if we need to. The last outlaw we had went by the name of Cambel. He could be back, this murder is odd. Who did it?



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Maybe we could figure it out by you introducing us to the characters a little more.

REAGAN

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No charaters were introduced, these are thoughts, it only the first paragraph anyways.
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Cool. Keep writing. I also have a novel called "Small World" that's I'd like you to help spread the word about, since you get the most views.



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