Song #7 I think

Question

Sit 

Stand 

Eat 
Sleep 

Repeat

My life is like a system

It never chances

I do the same thing

In 

 and 

Out 

But nothing ever chances 

I do the same thing 

Over and over again 

~ Ok sorry this is really just a dump of my ideas and really to clear out writer's block. We'll I wait for another song to get checked so I can revise it. XD Thanks for reading! 

Answer 1

I like the first draft! Did you mean changes instead of chances?

Comments

Yes! Thanks for pointing that out!