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Hello, guys! I'm holding a story/poem contest, and I welcome anyone with a story/poem to post.

Rules

1. No copying off others unless you credit them.

2. Words range is unlimited but you must put your story/poem in one post.

3. Duedate is August 12th

Places and Prizes

First Place: Is selected best answer/commented as best (words will be gold colored)

Second Place: Commented as second (words will be silver colored)

Third Place: Commented as third (words will be bronze colored)

______________

i will post winners on a separate post.




3 Answers

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my story is called the memory locket. here it goes.

`thunder crackles` alexzandra- i want emma, such a happy girl, until someone ruins it all for you....`yells` I LOST EVERYTHING IN THAT FIRE, AND SO DID MY FAMILY! YOU HEAR ME? my brother hit his head and lost his memory, he didn't remember me or any of us. and that's what's it's gonna be like for emma's family and friends.
 
2 DAYS LATER............
emma- `wakes up` where am i? what is this place? `wanders room` who is this? `picks up a picture of her sister and her mom`. emma wonders to the backhalf of the room in her big apartment. she picks up a note. the note says- i will help you, don't worry....-bruce. emma- what??!!? `picks up a bag, and leaves the building` emma rushes about on the sidewalk and runs into someone. emma- im so sorry? are you okay? bruce- yes im fine, you? emma- yes, thanks. bruce- my name is bruce what's your name? `emma looks around then see's a water bottle on a table near by, with the name crystal waters. emma- um my name is crystal waters. wait did you say bruce was your name? bruce? i saw a note- `bruce cuts her off and puts his finger over her lip, follow me he says. 30 minutes later and llt's of explaining.. emma- so you want me to beleive that when you were younger you were in a fire with your sister alexzandra and you hit your head and temoratry lost your memory and she thinks you lost it forever? and she wants to take away other people's memory to make her feel better? unbeleivable. bruce- well you better belive cos imma help you get your memory back, wer're gonna go to her calase and say we are here to tidy up then she'll show us around and we will know where she keeps the memory. i know that she keeps the memory in lockets. cmon we're gonna to to my house to rest then go out tommorw and get your memory back. emma- okay.
THE NEXT DAY
bruce `shakes emma` cmon let's go. emma-what? im up. bruce- let's goo. emma- okay. `they both leave the house` 
55 MINUTES LATER and riding rental bikes -phew-
bruce- we are here. emma- finally!!! `knocks on calase door` alexzandra- hello? emma- we are here to clean up we were sent to be your maids. alexzandra- very well, come in. 25 minutes later of explaining where things were, bruce and emma knew where things were. bruce- this way. crystal. emma- im right behind you.  emma- i think this is it, the memory room.  let's look around for my memory. alexzandra- what do you do think your doing? bruce- cleaning up the memory room m'am. alexzandra- okay, go on. 10 minutes later. bruce- crystal, here's your memory. emma- i'll be right there. emma- this is it, let's go. alexzandra- `yells` STOP! I KNEW YOU WERE UP TO NO GOOD!!! bruce- alexzandra it's me, bruce. i tried to come here before but the guards always stopped me. i didn't lose my memory. when i got out of the hospital, somebody told me you were dead. so i went to live with dad and mom. alexzandra- i told my dearest servent to tell everyone that. dad and mom didn't love me so you were all i had, but you didn't remember me. this isn't you. bruce- my memory loss was temporary. alexzandra pls. this isn't right. im here in front of you. you inprisoned all these people's happy memory's, there lives. alexzandra- if you are my  brother, what was my favorite tv show when i was young? what was my favorite color when i was ten? bruce- your favorite show as dora, and your favorite color was magenta pink, not hot pink, magenta. alexzandra- it is you!! bruce! i've missed you so much! emma- `opens her memory locket` bruce, my name is emma not crystal! my mom my dad they must be so worried i gotta get back. `emma starts running` bruce- emma wait, come back what about all these other helpless people's memory. give them back there memory, i mean i got mine back. right alexzandra? alexzandra- right. im so sorry for acting silly. i love you bruce. bruce- i love you too. now emma free all the memory. alexzandra, how so you do it? alexzandra- see that switch over there? emma- yes. alexzandra- pull it. it will release all the memorys to the right people. `pulls switch` blue swirls float in the air, returning to the correct person's soul. bruce- alexzandra, emma has to get home. so do we. mom and dad are DIEING to see you. they love you. they really do. alexzandra- okay thanks. emma- goodbye bruce, i can never repay you for what you did for me, thank you dearly. bruce- your welcome. goodbye emma.
 
everyone renturned to there familys and lived happy ever after. bruce emma and alexzandra still see each other. every wensday they go out for coffee. this is a happy ending.
 
 
 

thank you fancyratlover/christain girl [gemheart] i hope you liked my story i worked really hard on it. this contest was so much fun!! thank you!!

 
by (6.8k points)
it's kind of boring. i literlaly YAWNED while reading it. it did't have anything to do with it beeing eleven at night. :)
by
I like it HungerGames!! Maybe you should make it slightly bigger, but otherwise its a superb story!
+1 vote
by
My poem is called:
"Poem"
(It is completely original and was thought up quite recently. I hope you enjoy it!)
 
Poem
A vivid composition
A piece of the soul
Imaginative Language
Originality, whole.
by
This is excellent Dancer! I'm considering you for a place!
by
Thanks!! I worked hard on it!
by
No problem!
+1 vote
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Poem: rainbows are nice clouds are cool and fancyratlover is awsome.
by

Aw thanks for the end!

This poem is good, but I forgot to mention that you must put it in a format. Like this:

Rainbow are nice

Clouds are cool

And FancyRatLover is awesome.

Otherwise it is sweet and creative!




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