Don't Trust Anybody: Part one

Question

I created a story. It took 30 days to create it. Please read.

Jane is a 13 year old girl. She has a friend named Cody. Jane trusts everybody because she is a simple girl. So, one day, Cody told Jane,

" We are gonna have a teenager party. This year you turned 13. So we gotta have a party! Everybody will be there. "

So, Jane told it to her mom and her mom allowed her to go to the party, but come back before 12 am (night).

Jane said, " Ok mom, Lets see. "

So, when Jane arrived to school the next day, she asked Cody some details of the party.

Cody said, " The party will be at 8 pm and end at 11 pm. So, the party will be at 12'th block of Baker Street.            This party is for all the teenagers. Oh, the building number is 288 ".

So, Jane went to the party at 8 pm at the 12th Block of Baker Street.

She went to the house number 288. But she couldn't find anybody. She became so sad and thought, why will Cody fool me?

Suddenly, she heard a loud noise behind her. Somebody's giggling.

She turned back. She saw, its Cody. Cody said,

'I fooled you! Now, you are kidnapped. You can never ho back to your home again! '

Jane said, ' What do you mean? Do you think I am.that stupid? You are pranking me, right?

Cody said, Nah.

Then Cody just took a napkin what is wet with  chloroform. And then, he sprayed chloroform on Jane. Jane fainted.

Cody giggled and said, ' Never trust anybody'.

So, I will publish this story's part 2 later.

Answer 1

I’m sorry, I know this is off-topic, but I can’t see your name or read your stuff without thinking about Clara, the red-headed nun-ninja of Mrs. Davis.

Comments

LOL

Be polite

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He wasn't being impolite, though..?

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I dunno, in my opinion that is impolite.

Red headed nun-ninja is ok but -

I can't see your name or read your stuff without thinking about-

This part is soooo impolite!

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I don't think that's impolite. All he was trying to say was that your name reminded him of someone from a show.

But if you took offense to that, I don't think that he was trying to be impolite. :)

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Ay, mate; no offense given. We needn't discuss that said Clara from the show had her head exploded when she drank from the Holy Grail like she was told not to.

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Duke, you are probably the most random person I have ever come across. And it's awesomesauce.

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Eulen haben große Augen.

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Did you say that owls have big...eyes, is it? Eyes or ears, not 100% sure.

I mean I suppose so, mate, whatever you say lol.

- Dino

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“Owls have big eyes.”

Nun, ist Deutsch jetzt die offizielle Sprache von KidzTalk?

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DukeSilver

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Nu, cred că ar trebui să fie românească. La urma urmei, trebuie să mergem la Vatican pentru Bill Cipher.

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Adevărat.