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Two boys walk into a hospital room seeing their sis in a coma.

JOSH: Um... Doc his she going to live?

Doc: She has a 50% survival rate at this point.

David: (Destroys things in anger) WHY CANT SHE HAVE A 70% SURVIVAL RATE I AM SO MAD!!!!

Josh: We have to go.

David:ok, bye sis

Sis:

Josh: Bye Doc!!

 

The next morning someone knocks on the door.

KNOCK KNOCK!!

Josh:I GOT IT!!!

Josh:(Opens Door) hello?

Doc: Your sis is out of that coma she is all better now

Josh: (cries in joy) Thank You Lord

David: When can we see her.

Doc: Tomorrow.

Josh and David: YAY!!!

 

At noon when the went to lunch they got a call from Doc.

Josh: (Picks up phone) Hello?

Doc: Your sis is in critical condition get over here ASAP.

Josh:(Says in a worried look) ok.

 

They are driving on the parkway and BOOM the are hit by a car.

Josh: (says hurtling) david are you ok (Coughs)

David: No I think a broke my leg.

David: (Passes out) UGH!!

TO BE CONTINUED!!

 

Plz like it you if enjoyed!



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by (350k points)
Okay, nice story. I'm writing a story about someone in a coma (I've been planning it for 2 weeks). Nice story tho :D
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I am on a cliffhanger reading this more plz brother



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