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"This is not over!," said Stan to Robert. "Stan, just because he bullies you does not mean you should prank him.," said Terry. "I want to make this even.," said Stan. "Stan, there is no need to make this even.," said Terry. Stan got out his copy of Prank Rights. "Prank Rights Law Number Four states that "If one pranks a fellow prankster, then the prankster that was pranked must make things even with another prank. This must go on until both are satisfied.," said Stan. Since Stan loved pranks, he intvented Prank Rights so nothing would be unfair between pranksters. Stan then ran to the basement where he kept all his pranking supplies. Jerry chased Stan.

"Acid......Ants.......Boomerangs.......Dynamite...",  said Stan as he read the labels on his prank bins. "Do mom and dad know about the prank bins?," said Jerry, straightening his tie. "Nope.," said Stan. "But if you prank Robert, then you'll get detention!," said Jerry. Stan got out his copy of Prank Rights again. "Prank Rights Law Number Eight states that when in detention, a prankster should play his cards carefully.," said Stan. "All you need to do is tell an adult that Robert is bullying you!," said Jerry. "I must even out the pranks! You do not get it!," said Stan. Actually, Jerry got it fine. He knew that his twin brother loved pranking more than skateboarding, and he was pretty into skateboarding. But then.....



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It's good. but you should start a paragraph every time a person has dialouge because it's kinda confusing when so many people are talking.



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