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Crossing the ice will be fatal but I had to save my sister. I took one shakey step onto the ice my mind racing. I can make it I told my self. I heard a quiet voice in my head DONT STEP YOU WILL FALL! I have too I took another step and the ice caved in plunging me into darkness. I tried to swim upward tried to breathe. My chest felt like it was going to explode. I was helpless.



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Heyyy this is pretty good!!!!

P.S. My auto correct corrected good to god lol....

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No its for a diffrent contest. Im working on yours.
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