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It all started when a little baby boy was born. His name was Mikel, and his parents immediately noticed he was an extraordinary child. They became terrified and the very night of his birth he was put in a dumpster to starve. He was left in there all night but in the morning a young woman heard his crys and saved him. She took him home and raised him as her own with her 1-year-old son James. After only a year with her new child, the woman notices some strange things about him. At night his eyes glowed a bright yellow but during the daytime they were green. Instead of drinking milk like most children, he feasted on meat. One night the family's dog went missing. When the woman checked in Mikel's room she noticed there was blood on the walls and Mickel was gone. Fearing for her child she searched everywhere. Only when she went to the basement did she discover that Mikel was safe and had eaten the dog fur and all! She scolded him and sent him to bed immediately. Mikel's strangeness only grew by the time he was six he could turn into any creature alive. When he was eight he started to grow fangs. 

Sorry Its not finished yet and It doesn't have a name any ideas for me. I don't know how long it will be either. Ill make more as soon as I have a title.P.S do U think I should change his name.

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I like it! (1 vote, 20%)
Change his name (0 votes)
I have an title Idea(say in comments) (0 votes)
U R bad at writing (0 votes)
U GO GIRL ITS AWESOME (3 votes, 60%)
WRITE MORE! (1 vote, 20%)



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YEAH THUS STORY IS SO AWESOMESAUCE CREDITS TO NOBI LOL OMG GAMEKID IGNORE THE HATERS WRITE MOREEE
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Aw thanks! Dont worry Im working on more. Im also working on a title any Ideas
0 votes
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STAWHP CUZ MIKKEL IS INGA'S BROTHER'S NAME

(Ik this because he did a name reveal, his account was called Mystery Meat. He is inactive)
by (194k points)
Op what should I change it to then
by (731k points)
idk
+1 vote
by (24.0k points)
Who did ur bad at writing this story is WOLFTASTIC!
by (194k points)
Thanks soooo much any Ideas at a title
by (24.0k points)
umm maybe A creatures Born sorry if it sounds bad it's just an idea
by (194k points)

Um.... thats a good idea lll think about it.regular_smile

by (24.0k points)
okay sorry if it's bad i am bad at making titles lol
by (194k points)
I think I might use it on nameing the first chapter just not as the title
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Hmm okay! I think u'll figure somethin out for the title



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