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There was an 11-year-old girl named Betty she was studying her homework It was math math was her favorite subject her dad was in the kitchen making dinner He was making tacos and cheese yum yum she said when she was in her room. Then once they ate dinner betty told her dad that she wanted to take a walk out in the street The dad said yes He said I'll go with you He started grabbing somethings like a flashlight water bottle and some snacks betty went up to her room She had a music box that her mom gave her before she died She started winding it and listening to it Such beautiful noise she said Then her dad calls him downstairs honey I'm ready Let's go out and do our walk so she ran down the stairs She tripped and fell She said ow I hurt my knee He said Oh it's okay Do you need a a patch to put on it she said no I think oh okay as a little bit of blood dripped down her leg the dad said are you sure she said yes I'm sure Let's go out for a walk okay honey let's go As there was an abandoned house three blocks away They were just walking talking about problems Dad was telling a story about how her mom really died She was getting a little sad and tired but then her dad wiped it off and she said you know nothing bad will happen to us I'm always here for you really buddy said yes Dad said they see me abandoned house They were yellow lights inside of it Weird Betty said I thought it was an abandoned house There shouldn't be any lights in there the dad said yes maybe there's just an animal living in there and that's how it looks as betty heard a eerie scream coming from the abandoned house Dad dad dad she screamed what honey I heard a scream from there Oh honey you're probably just imagining things It's probably just voices in your head.I think it's getting a little dark Let's go home Dad but he said Okay honey as Betty's seen a black eerie figure coming from the window Dad Dad she screamed again What honey I see you black person in there The dad looked to see what was going on There was nobody and nothing there.Honey I think you're getting tired Let's go home The dad said no dad I seen something there I know I did betty said Well honey it's getting really late Let's go home ok betty said As they walk back to the house buddy heard another eerie scream Dad! she screamed I know I heard that scream Are you sure honey said dad yes im sure! I've been hearing those screams ever since we have been walking. Honey you really need to get some sleep Let's go home. ok said betty As they got home Betty got in her bed and snuggled up tight The dad said good night honey Betty said good night Dad He said don't let the bedbugs bite She said I won't Dad *giggles*

Ask Betty fell asleep She woke up to an Erie Erie Erie Scream. Dad she yelled i know I heard something please. She didn't hear a reply so she screamed Dad again. No answer. Daddy started to wonder what was going on so she got out of her covers and went downstairs. Dad she whispered Where are you She seen her door was left open She sent blood was leading out of the door... um... dad? She said whare are you? No answer.She looked at the door and still seen the blood She followed the blood and it let out to her patio Then she didn't see anything but then.......She said her dad's body hanging from the patio ceiling...ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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and no it did not happen



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this is longer than my playlist O_o

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Part two!

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This is almost impossible. Your friend would have had so much trauma she wouldn’t even want to recount the story to you, she’d be in a mental hospital or mourning the death of her father.
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That was really hard to read without quotations commas periods etc. please make part 2 have good grammar.
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Meh.

I highly doubt this happened bc a patio I'm pretty sure is always ground level so....
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no thers what really hight

if you want part two I have it
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...

I doubt that this actually happened.
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I promise meowla

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Me too. It’s a bit too much on the horror story side for me
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Yeah, I'm really not buying it.
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If you say so I guess.
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@Scrib

Was that to me or Nicole?
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That was to Nicole
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Ah :D
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Yeah lol



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