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 CHAPTER 11

Maya

 

  I am walking. I don't know where I am walking. Steve has his arm around me. My eyes are closed.

 

"Maya, are you ok?"

"Hmm umm ya hum"

"I don't know how to speak hum. English Please?"

 I laugh. I had not laughed since the tree falling.

 

 "I know you dislike me now."

"I don't dislike you, I hate you!", I say.

 I stare at him. He opens his mouth just a little bit. I move closer, and I kiss him. I feel like I am on fire, he must feel it too. I forget about everything in the world. I pull away.

"Maya, what did that m-"

"I don't know. Are you my b-"

"I gues-"

"Lets just go with ye-"

"Yes. Yes. I am not your brother."

"Amazing. I really didn't know that."

 

CHAPTER 12

Steve

I felt better having her around, but it scared me how easily she forgave me. I stop. I can hear a car. I sit down. Maya opens her eyes and sits beside me. I see a car and I wave my hands like a wild man. The car stops.

"AYE! What are you kids doing on the side of the road like that?" a voice says.

"Is that Maya? Oh meee gosh! M AYA! Are you OK?"

"Mara? Is that you?" Maya says.

"Yes! Get in! You and your.. um.."

"Boyfriend." I say sharply.


 




3 Answers

+1 vote
by (45.3k points)
Is this all???? Is this the last????
by (45.3k points)
Last of what? There are al lot more chapters. Then the barrier.
+1 vote
by (2.7k points)

great job! I love how u give the personal view of both characters! I'm not too big on romance novels, but this is the next big thing!

P.S., if u email me and tell me its u i'll give u the password 4 our new account and we can discuss plots!

+1 vote
by (510 points)

I love it. love the rotation of personal perspectives. top-knotch winner!




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