Around | Chapter 3| I haven't done this in a while

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asked Sep 28, 2016 in Fiction by jazzlinny (45.3k points)

Molly's eyes swerved around as she watched thin and frail people swaying. Molly's eyes widened and she turned and faced Cleo, who looked determined, but her eyes looked scared. Molly walked towards an empty cot and placed her bags down. Cleo put hers down on a next door cot. They sat on the cots and smiled.

Finally! Molly thought I am finally doing this!

But that feeling of excitement quickly faded. Molly started thinking of her mom and dad, missing them terribly.

That's The end of Chapter 3! Hope you like it!!!

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answered Sep 29, 2016 by ❤️GryffindorGal❤️ (134k points)

Interesting!

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answered Sep 29, 2016 by rae (110k points)

wow thats short. and are they atsleep-away camp or a military base?

commented Sep 29, 2016 by ❤️GryffindorGal❤️ (134k points)

Read the first 2 chapters

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