Everpane fanfic 2

Question

Before we start

A quick verse from “Gangsta’s Paradise but every other beat is Amish Paradise”

Shavin my momma, things like electronoscope

Lets get into it

Nicolas and Azure held hands while walking to class. Benjamin and his friends were still mad over the lost game last night. However, Benjamin uttered something to his friends: “I brought all of my consoles, i stashed em away in a secret spot. Wanna play when this stuff is over?” His friends grinned, happy at the prospect. They all went to their classes, one teacher after another, and they went to lunch.

                                                               As Benjamin and his friends sat at the table, Benjamin pulled out his Gameboy. “We’re gonna get in trouble man, put it away.” One of his friends said worriedly. Benjamin had a smug look on his face, and put his finger over his friends lips. “I got Super Punch Out on this off of a Nintendo hacker on this site called Ebay. Works pretty smooth. Well, partially. Since two buttons are missing, I got a friend back home to not only drill, wire, and fit in two buttons, but also to repaint it, SNES style. Now, it works just like an SNES, but better.” Benjamin said as he displayed the new version to his friends. “Forgot to mention it has a specification enhancer invented by yours truly.” Benjamin added. He was secretly a genius, with a IQ of 153.

                                                              Benjamin finished his food before anyone else, and played Super Punch Out on his GBA, before being spotted by Sylvester. “WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH THAT DEVICE IN YOUR HAND?!?!” He yelled. Benjamin quickly put it away and had a faint but confident grin on his face. “YOUNG MAN, GIVE THAT DEVICE TO ME THIS INSTANT!” He commanded. “What device?” Benjamin said, somewhat sounding truthful. “THAT HANDHELD, YOU MORON OF A CHILD!” He barked at him. “What evidence do you have to prove it?” Benjamin asked. Sylvester reached into Benjamin’s pocket in his jacket, finding nothing. He reached into the other pockets, nothing. Slyvester angrily opened his mouth as if he had something to say, but bit his tongue and walked off angrily, slamming a nearby table in the process, where Nicolas and Azure were sitting.

                                “Nicolas, do you play video games?” Azure asked. “Not much, but I like to watch you play video games.” He replied. “I got a game we can play together.” She said while blushing. “Sounds wonderful.” He said.

Hope you enjoyed this one

Answer 1

This is nice. I really like what you did with Sylvester, he's like the Snape of Kingdom Camp x3

-Nobi

Comments

More like a male Trunchbull from Matilda to me lol

Answer 2

The ending was by far the best part, but if you just converted everything else to the part like the ending, that would be a true shipping.

Nobi, take notes, this is how you entertain an audience.

Comments

Gotta make room for the other things or else it’d be just plain weird

Also yep

I have experience writing

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Hm. I'll think about this.

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GC, makes sense, I trust your expertise.

Nobi, YES, the ship is too far departed.

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Yeah J-train, thanks

Also Nobi, NAZURE IS NEARLY TO ITS DESTINATION! STOP TRYING TO STOP IT!

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But it's really not, guys x3

After all, my story and its characters are all my creation. I ultimately control their lives x]

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We control their fantasy lives which are nearly as important >:)

Its like this:

Discoveries are almost if not just as important as inventions

If Leif Erikson didnt discover America

We wouldn’t be talking here

But if the electronic tablet wasn’t invented

I wouldn’t be talking here

See

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I understand, but if I'm going to respect your fantasy, you should try not to push me so hard with Nazure x3

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Now technically, Leif's expeditions weren't documented, and we didn't really know about it until long after.

I'm sorry for bringing this topic back up, I don't want to argue here.