Ok, so I would add quotation marks but after ‘Mikel took a deep breath’ I would put… ‘Mikel took a deep breath. Will all his might, he forced himself to remain calm. Control the beast control the beast control the beast he thought. Perspiration trickled down his neck as he closed his eyes and breathed in, breathed out. Breathe in, breathe out. Breathe in, breathe out. Taking rhythmic gulps of air, he imagined the beast being squashed between 2 boulders. Breathe in, breathe out. Mikel opened his eyes. Staring in the mirror, he noticed that the sweat had dried, and his face was flushed with exhaustion. But he had done it. For the time being, of course. His mother had told him it would never go away completely, but if he wanted to go to school, he would have to control the beast. He was nervous, though. Not first day of school jitters like most people, but he was worried about hurting other kids. And what if people found out his secret? What would they think of him? He had heard stories about mythological beings, and people ran away from them. Would people run away from him? He wasn’t normal, he was…Weird. ‘No’ he told himself sternly, while at the same time concentrating on squashing the beast. I am…extraordinary. Not weird. Now focus. He closed his eyes once more and absorbed himself in the wonders of his extraordinary mind.
u like? Hopefully it worked and ur writers block went away. I HATE WRITERS BLOCK. it’s soooooo annoying. But yeah! Put pt 2 of the story after u come up with some more!