the kidnapped
halloween was drawing closer. Everyone was putting up decorations the only house without any was sky engine house she had always wanted to go trick or treating but her parents would never let her.
sky's perspective
me and my friends were walking to the shop chatting about what we were going to buy .chloe was buying ribbons to finish of her creepy doll outfit . Lia was going to buy sweets and daisy was seething for makeup for her vampire costume we went and bought every thing on the list and extras we also decided to have a picnic on the grass outside my house . We took the long way home as we were walking a white can pulled up . We shrugged and carried on all of a sudden two people jumped out the front and grabs us and started draging us towards the van someone opened the back . I twisted and kicked and scratched and not my way out of the struggle I watched helplessly as my friends were shoved in to the back I tried to run after the van but I was to slow I went to go phone the police but I could not find my phone I ran as fast as I could home no one was home a feeling of dread spread throughout me no it could not be ...
Did you like the kiddnaper the rest is still not ready is there anything that I can do to improve