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Billy left to go to his friend Carly's house at midnight for a secret gathering. He didn't tell his parents.

When he left, he said "I'm going to see my math tutor" because he had that that night.

When he left, he went to his friend's house.

But, there was nobody at the house. The door was unlocked. So, he walked in. 

When he entered, he heard a ghostly moaning. He thought it was all part of the experience. So, he went up to Carly's room.

When he got there, he saw a note on the wall written in red that read save me i'm being taken to the abandoned mal with the last l trailing off.

Billy knew if he called his parents he would be grounded so, he just decided to go on his own.

He tried to leave the house. But, just before he left the house, all the exits got sealed.

Then a ghost appeared in front of him to see the ghost of his math tutor all firey.

He ran up to the master bedroom and smashed open the window with the nightstand nd dove out the shattered window.

He sprinted to the mall at top speed.

When he entered, he turned on his flashlight and saw a lot of shattered glass. He saw a trail of the yarn Carly always had with her.

He followed the yarn to the abandooned theater which was crawling with zombies. He waeved through the hoardes of zombies.

He found his friend guarded by a huge spider and the spider smacked Billy against the wall and Billy grabbed a baby zombie and threw it at the spider to distract it while he grabbed Carly.

And then Carly ran out with Billy and they agreed to never go to that abandoned house again

the end

(hope this works)




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I like how it ends with no one dying horribly or anything a-=D

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the results are top secret until September. good luck though!
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OH MY GODS YES IT DOES.



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