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I Grabbed my rudimentary sawn-off shotgun and said a prayer. it had surrounded me. It was a matter of life or death. I kicked the door open. To my surprise, it didn’t seem to be there. Little did i know, it stalked me through the shadows, watching my every step, hearing my every breath, waiting for the moment to come. All of a sudden, one pounces. It’s overwhelming strength pins me to the ground. I dropped my shotgun and tried my hardest to overcome the creatures fierce grasp. I reached for my shotgun, failed. Strangling, a horrifying experience i have never experienced. Odd sensation takes over my body. All of a sudden, the creature screeches and increases is strength. I thought it was my dying moments. I reached for my shotgun again, and failed. I tried one more time, and succeeded. I shot the creature, hoping it would be the end of my suffering. It was. This creature ran away. It didn’t leave a trace. My team went missing. Couldn’t find them. I hoped to find my flare gun i left at the plane. When i arrived, it was dismantled. When i looked inside the remains, nothing was to be found but some fragments of our machine guns. I looked closely at the ground however, and found some yellow dots. I looked closely, and it wasn’t paint. I remember as the creature ran away, i saw some faint yellow. Was it the creature’s blood? Maybe. My theory could be true. I found what was an abandoned hut. I tightly held on to my sawn-off and entered. It was empty. All i could find was the diary of a native Filipino who documented the legend of this creature. They called the creature “anino demonyo”, which i didn’t understand. All of a sudden i hear fast constant footsteps. They get louder and louder. I ready my sawn-off and point it at the door. The door is kicked open. Turns out, it was my translator and close friend, Danilo Reyes. I almost pulled the trigger, due to my readiness, but upon seeing him, i got a big sense of relief. In this massive jungle, i found a friend. He told me the term “anino demonyo” translates to “shadow demon” in english. Seemingly, the natives of this village either abandoned the village or were picked off by the shadow demon. It was a sad situation. Danilo was from Manila, and was a city kid. Some guys in the crew like Brian Humphrey made fun of him for being a “spoiled city kid.” Turns out, Danilo didn’t have life given to him on a silver platter. He grew up poor. His mother had to lug around about 30 pounds of Vegetables to sell around their neighborhood just to get barely 2 meals a day. She did her best. Danilo remembers nights where she couldn’t even pick up her arms. It’s depressing, really. Danilo hasn’t gotten a letter from her in 1 month, not including the month we’ve spent in this nightmare-jungle. He’s told me he’s thought about deserting and going back home. I can’t blame him. These Japanese soldiers haven’t patrolled around here, surprisingly. Probably due to that shadow demon. Back home, i remember my mother sold alot of her vegetables at the market. Anyways, me and Danilo are tryin’ to come up with some way to kill this creature. Next entry may not come.

-Thomas Ripley, 5th air force, November 1942.

Hope you enjoyed the first “Entry” of dead quiet! More coming soon!

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This is loosely based on Predator (1987).

Danilo’s mom is based off of a real person.

The flare in the plane was an idea from Call of Duty: Vanguard.

Thomas Ripley has Minor Nyctophobia after this incident.

This takes place on a remote Filipino Island.

That’s some extra info.
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Cool!



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by (130k points)
Ah, this is so cool, and you left a lot of room for elaboration, I'm looking forward to reading more of these! Also, I found a website (I'm not gonna put it here because I can't remember if KT allows websites and I don't want to waste this answer for that) that might help for research.

P.S. I thought that it was called a sawed-off, not a sawn-off.
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It's //Link not allowed, social media interactions found//
by (130k points)
Yeah, 'bout what I thought.
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Thanks for trying to help. The shotgun is made out of carved wood (for the main base aka the sawn off part), fragments of a swiss army knife (for the trigger and inside parts), and parts of a 50. Caliber machine gun that was on their B-17 plane (for the barrel).

P.S. yes, most of the world usually calls the shotgun a sawn-off.

- sincerely, GravityCentered

by (130k points)
Ooh, okay. Cool
by (130k points)
If you go to Google and search up world War 2 database, that'll be the one of the first websites that'll show up (the other one might be the national archives), it's a really cool place to just look around even if you're not doing research. Happy writing!
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by (126k points)
You really have a thing for shotguns, don't you?
by (486k points)
You have the same fascination, too, don't you?
by (126k points)
I prefer antique firearms. Maybe I’ll make a post on it eventually but I’ve been so busy with…you know…the business stuff. Gahhhh….it’s gruesome. At least I’ve got a couple content writers, a personal VA, several marketers, multiple professional coders/developers, etc. But still, it’s exhausting.
by (486k points)
Hey, at least you're doing something. And the finished product of what you're doing is going to be so worth it, just watch :)
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I just love how shotguns work. I’ve fired a bolt-action (yes that exists), single barrel, auto, and a pump. One time i killed 6 doves in one hunting session.

So yes, i do have a thing for shotguns, duke.
by (126k points)
Name the three best firearms ever produced.

My great-grandfather had his first shotgun. He gave it to my grandfather. My grandfather gave it to my dad recently. It's not much, just a single barrel 12 gauge but hot dang it's a beauty. I love that thing so much. Maybe one day it'll be mine, but right now I'm stuck with my dad's old shotgun which honestly I kind of hate.
by (150k points)
Top 3.

3: Mosin Nagant. Beautiful Rifle with power behind it. Mass-produced, if im not mistaken 34 million were produced by the U.S.S.R.

2: Colt M1911. Literally the most expendable gun in the U.S. Military. Been in service SINCE WW1.

1: it tortures me to say this, but the AK-47. Massed produced and a great rifle.
by (126k points)
YOU BLOODY COMMIE!

Also the Springfield 1911 is better than the Colt. Anyway mine are:

Colt Peacemaker (.45 cal six gun)

Spencer Seven-shot repeater rifle (shot by Lincoln before being mass-issued to Civil War men)

Springfield Armory 1911
by (150k points)
I change my mind about #3.

Gatling gun. Without it, no full auto guns.
by (126k points)
Ah yeah you know they never talk about gatlings much for some reason.
by (150k points)
I think its because of wild west stereotypes



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