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Hi so @snickerdoodles made “the wrath of securely” and you guys had a lot of ideas to improve so I made it this is chapter 1 remember if you haven’t read @snickerdoodles version plz read theirs first. I don’t wanna bore you so, here!

 

 

A grand warrior was battling a super Villain in a dark hallway, the only light coming from a singular light bulb, bathing their faces in an eerie light. "Face it, Michaetos! You'll never stop me!" said the bad guy. Light glinted off the supervillain's armor. "I may not, Rafael, but I will still fight to my last breath! IT'S NOT OVER TILL IT'S OVER! REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" said Michaetos. "Boys, it's time for dinner!" said a female voice. The brothers ran inside. The mother put down the babo steak and the blue milk. "There is something we need to talk about." said the mother. "Your father won't be able to come home this month. He's out with the military fighting the Rebel Securely people. They were hired as security, but betrayed them, catching everyone off guard. "Mom, will they attack us?" Rafael asked, classic little brother style. The mother replied "probably not dear. this is a very small town." Just then, they heard the sounds of a shuttle landing. Meanwhile outside, A shuttle came down onto their planet. on the side it said: Securly://. it came with others. They opened up to see an army of robots. The main one had the robots, but also a person in armor. It wore a mask and had an arm blaster on the left hand and a sword in the right. In an alien language it said: " LOCKBAY HEMTAY LLAAY '' The Robots replied with a series of beeps. Then they set out into the village. Rafael went outside to see what was happening. The moment he stepped out of the safety of his home he regretted it. A robot caught sight of him and blasted. At first, nothing happened, which was weird. He was expecting pain. Then, chains popped out of the ground and grabbed his hands. A box surrounded him that said:

 

Page Blocked!

This page has been blocked

Noooooooooooo! This was even worse! Give me the worst pain in the world but not this! This is the worst thing to ever happen to me! He thought.

Michaetos looked out the window this whole time to see that happen. He was shocked. He ran inside and grabbed one of his father's old laser rifles and laser swords. Even with no idea how to use them, he ran out and tried to sneak his way out of the village. He ran into a forest and hid behind a tree. His heart hammered so hard in his chest he was surprised a robot didn’t hear it. He saw that one of the shuttles was open, and no one was in it. he dashed inside and locked the door. a gun blast almost hit him in the face. He ducked. ``What do you think you are doing?" said a female voice. "Please don't block meh!" cried Michaetos. "oh, so you're against them. Sorry I almost murdered you." Hiding behind a chair was a girl, about his age. Relief flooded his senses. "My name is Bria." "Do you know how to operate this thing!?!" said Micheatos. "EXCUSE YOU!" screamed Bria " I SAID MEH NEM! YA BETTA TELL MEH YOURS!!!!!!!!!!" "sorry sorry. My name is Michaetos. Now, do you know how to operate this thing?" "No. I was just hiding in here." "well now what?" "I'll just go see if I can learn the basics." She pushed a single button, and the ship flew out of the planet. She found a steering wheel and used it so they weren’t hurtling through near space. The person with the cool armor saw one of the ships fly away., A robot asked a beep. "ONAY TIAY ROBABLYPAY EEDNAY EPARSRAY. ODAY OTNAY 

TTACKAAY."




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:) that’s funny!
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Hey, give all credit to @snickerdoodle! I only edited it



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