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She was running, running never stopping fearing that if she did, she would not get back up.

She was crying as she ran not knowing why just knowing that she must get away, knowing that this meant life or death. She heard someone, something behind her she turned head her head catching a quick glimpse of someone or something behind her WAM she hit the ground running the pain took her breath away. She tried to get back up, but all her energy was spent she tried again telling herself that she must that everything everything depended on this, but her body was done she used the last of her strength to turn her throbbing body over. What she saw took her breath away again, she felt the hair on her neck stick straight up and though she was hot a second ago she was now cold the thing came closer slowly she squinted into the shadows trying to see what was closing in on her.

Suddenly it jumped she closed her eyes thinking it was the end...

Ava woke up gasping she sat up straight she was covering in sweat and her heart was beating she looked around taking in all the familiar things her desk her chair slowly her heart slowed down "It was just a dream she told herself it was just a dream." But she had had this dream for almost a month she always woke up at the same time when he or whatever it was about the pounce. She felt her face felt the tears still slipping down silently that was real at least.

But why, why was she having these dreams?

They always left her awake and she was always tired, and her grades were slipping she was afraid to go to sleep afraid these dreams would torment her. 

Her parents were worried she had never been a good student so she had got away with it for a while but she had never failed 3 tests in a row too.

Oh no school she looked at the time 6:45 No,no,no school started at 7:20 and she had to take the bus and it was here at 7:10!

She jumped out of bed felling her wobbly legs barely hold her up and jumped in the shower back into the real world...

Hope you enjoy please tell me if you like it or how I can make it better!




2 Answers

+1 vote
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Ooooooh mysterious  .I really really enjoyed it :D ,way better than my writing

There are a few places where you didnt put end marks. That needed them . it gets hard to read in those places.
by (164k points)
Ok thanks (It's not better than yours)

Where are they I will put them in!
+1 vote
by (899k points)
I hope this story isn’t centered around me… (not that I’ve actually had this happen to me before)
by (164k points)
Umm no ofc not!

(Wait you have had this happen before?)

Did you like the story?
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1. Nope, not at all.

2. Yep!
by (164k points)
Ok

I'm so glad!



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