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As I've said before this story idea is by my little sister .

  Why am I so nervous ? It's a school for people like me. I walked through halls of my new school looking for Room  208. I had never been to school before. Because of my abilities, my mom used to homeschool me, but when she found this school she was quick to send me here. 

   " Gurls !" My thoughts were interrupted by  a shreiky voice . I turned around and saw a  girl , who looked around sixteen, her green eyes glint with wickedness. She flipped her coffee brown hair.  Quick as a flash, I felt a grasping force lifting me seven feet high off the ground. I panic. "Please !" I scream as my arms flailed like ribbons in the wind.The girl smirks.

" Why should I ?"

"Because you are a nice human being who enjoys making others happy"

"Ha ! Your haihandShe laughs. I didn't see anything amusing about my hair. It wasn't messy . It was just put up into a ponytail . "It's blue."

"So ?" I just wanted her to get me down.

" It's the ugliest colour on the planet !" At that very second, A girl with kind eyes and platinum blond hair walked in the room, noticed me , and shouted, 

"Stop it ! You're torturing her." She grabs the mean girl's hand and does some fighting techniques that I have No idea what they are called. That caused the mean girl to drop me.

"Sup."

 

 




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Nice! Love it! I hope there's more!

~ Your friend, Wraya <3

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I edited it so look at it again :D
by (165k points)
Beatiful!

She must have gotten her writing talent from her big sis!
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Ok! :)
by (68.9k points)

Love it! Um, it says "Ha ! Your haihandShe laughs." Shouldn't it be fixed? Is it supposed to be like that???

~ Your friend, Wraya <3

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Typo Lolll btw I'm working on a chapter of the Justice Crew Trilogy. I really want you to read it when it comes out .
by (68.9k points)

LOL. Ooh! Sounds interesting! I will! Just tell me when it comes out!

~ Your friend, Wraya <3




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