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​i could not believe they had found me I had been so careful how had they found me what will they do will they come back I was so involved in these thoughts did not hear heavy boots on the stairs slowly walking  towards me until I felt a rough hand on my shoulders  and a male voice saying on you will regret ever opening  that door  then he slid his hand into his pocket and pressed down suddenly a sharp pain  ran through my neck to my heart I crumpled to the ground another bolt ran through and I found it hard to breath  and it all turned black  faintly  I herd a scream glass breaking a yell and then silence but a warm sticky substince  seep in to  my clothes BLOOD




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This is a great first draft.

If it was edited to have the right grammar, it would be perfect.
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