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So, I came out of the blue with a story. You guys may of needed an about, or at least a warning.

About: A 10 year old (Mexican) New Yorker is the son of a Navy Seal. His brother went to Vietnam for the war, and he never sees him since. This is set somewhere in the 1930s/40s, and I'm going to pretend that the war still goes on when Antonio is about 14/15. He is a highly athletic boy who keeps his head down because his other brother, Victor, is always in trouble. He is really smart, but not as smart as Vinny. He plays basketball, which gets his mind off of things. He reacts to thing sensitively, because his father was in the war and has PTSD. Since his father was exposed to a lot of chemicals, he is not the healthiest. They are a Catholic family. His older brother is 4 years older than him and the oldest is 10 years older than him. So when Tony was born Vinny was 10 and Victor is 4. When he is 10, his brother is 14 and Vinny is 20.

Vinny is Tony's best friend and the family was heartbroken when he got drafted, because he had a heart like no one else's.

Tony is favored because he went to a junior military training school, when he was 2. For after those hard 6 years, he finally attended regular school. He was trained in protecting himself, all kinds of martial arts, and offensive strats. Though, he still got in a lot of fights on the streets and at school. People were always messing with him.

In the next chapter, it'll start the rollercoaster.


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