1. Well, you need to maybe make your work more interesting, so it might stand out and people might like it better (Not saying it is horrible already, in fact, I love it!!) But maybe try to add more adjectives or something to make your writing more interesting so it will stand out!
2. I know, I have been through that, trust me! But, you just need to be brave about it and just say it! He cares about your personal life, too! Not just your mom does, and he can know, he won't laugh or make fun of you about it!
3. I will totally visit it and comment on it! I was thinking I would do that sometime soon!
4. Of course you can be my friend! I always want to make a new one, and here is the perfect opportunity, so of course I will be your friend!
Sincerely Yours,
Cindy7872 AJ