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Please read if you have a fear of swimming in the ocean.

It was a warm, sunny day at Charles Beach, California in 1969.

A young 17-year old Ron Davis and his girlfriend of the same age, Bella Porter, went out in the water. They swam about 50 yards away from shore.

An orca leaped out of the water, and latched its teeth on Ron.

Bella screamed, and people came swimming.

The orca was violently shaking Ron in his mouth.

As people were near bella, a massive great white the size of that same orca latched on bella.

The great white bit down so hard on bella that it ripped her in half, killing her.

The orca drowned Ron to death, and severe bite marks were left on him.

The orca and shark swam away, narrowly avoiding another beach-goer with a spear gun.

Police arrived at the scene, but too little too late.

News reporters came.

They asked witnesses questions.

“How big was this shark?” Asked a reporter to a marine expert on the beach.

“It looked about the same size as the orca, which looked fully grown. About 25 feet. This orca randomly attacked this young man unprovoked, which is very unnatural.” the expert replied.

“Could these two animals be, lets say, teaming up to cause this?” The reporter asked.

“No way. Orcas are natural predators of great whites and sharks in general.” The expert replied again.

“They were seen swimming away and they didn’t even attack each other.” The reporter mentioned.

“Thats pretty unusual, you don’t see that. I have no words for that.” The expert confusingly replied.

*cut to the submarine “predator”*

The same orca and shark approach the sub, underwater.

“Tommy, why do you always cheat?” Alex asked as they were playing cards.

“I dont, you just suck.” Tommy replied while collecting his won money.

The orca rams the sub.

“Woah, what just happened here, Ed?” Tommy asked.

“We got bumped by someth-” Ed said before getting rammed again.

“Surface, i aint taking c rap like this.” Captain Joe said.

“Cap, lets stay.” Alex said.

“To hell with that, surface!” Joe commanded.

They surfaced, but not before getting heavily rammed again by the orca.

“THIS IS WHY WE GOTTA SURFACE, WHAT IS THAT?!?!” Tommy yelled.

They reached the surface.

“Alex, check.” Joe commanded again.

Alex checked the scope outside.

All of a sudden, the scope was broken and he couldn’t see. It was almost like it broke off.

“Hey, hey, HEY! Our scope broke off.” Alex angrily stated.

Little did he know, the shark was chewing on the upper half of it.

“Go up, see what happened.” Joe told Alex.

Alex obeyed, and went to the top of the sub.

He saw the broken scope. He kneeled and looked at it carefully.

Suddenly, the orca popped out of the water, and latched on to alex mid air.

Alex tried to punch the orca off him, and tried to stab it, but before the knife could get in the orca, the shark came in and ripped Alex’s torso off. Alex shortly after died.

“What just happened?” Ed asked.

“Lets wait till Alex gets back.” Joe said.

END OF EPISODE 1

Haha hope this gave you fear

Happy thanksgiving!



3 Answers

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Eurgh I'm picturing it in my head fear

by (151k points)
Let it grow, let it grow

Like it did so long agoooooo
by (94.4k points)
Iiii knowwww

Iiiii knowwww

The title was something I couldn't leeett goooo
+1 vote
by (151k points)
Should i make more?
by (116k points)
yes
0 votes
by (130k points)
And I thought the beginning was just a typo...

Very noice, I though the first characters would be the main characters, apparently not.
by (151k points)
+1
Haha yes.

Also the shark and orca are like best buds idk



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