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Thomas jerked up after having a bad dream of his brother running over the battle field and getting shot by a German gun then his mother called out from the kitchen "Thomas have you gotten the donuts yet" Thomas shivered as his mom said that they were both Jewish and if the Nazi's found out they would probably execute them, their dad already had been found out and had been taken to a German Labor camp and they wouldn't risk it but Thomas had promised to get some donuts for his mom so as he got dressed and brushed his teeth he thought about his brother then he headed out the door to get the donuts, A few hours later he came out of the shop with a dozen donuts crammed in a box when he heard motorcycles in the distance, he froze as he saw a group of German soldiers on a dozen motorcycles all with Mp 40s...



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Keep going this is cool
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I would say the same thing, too, but I have an attention issue, so the lack of much needed commas in certain areas and periods doesn't make it pleasing.



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