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Chapter Three

Moon woke up feeling sore. She was in a sack. But she still had her bag. She checked if she still had the star. Luckily it was still in her bag. She could hear a muffled voice and it sounded like Sunny’s. “LET ME OUT OF HERE!” Moon screamed angrily. There was no response after a while her kidnappers stopped and threw the sack she was in knocking her out again.

Moon was asleep or knocked out. She couldn’t tell but all she could see was this woman carrying her baby and right next to her was a little girl that looked like Moon’s sister Eclipse. The woman was running away from sun guards. The woman had the Moon rock with her. She then said something to her other daughter and gave her baby to her. Then the guard threw the sword at the woman, killing her. 

Moon woke up surprised she didn’t know what she saw but the woman didn’t look like a regular Moon person she looked like Queen Luna. Moon's aunt. Eclipse told her about Luna how she saved her and Moon somehow but the baby looked like Moon in the vision. Could Queen Luna have  saved her when she was a baby? Moon was so confused about this vision. “Hey get up!” One of the guards yelled. “I’m up jeez!” 

“You better watch your mouth little miss princess!” “You better brush your teeth more often, jeez it smells so bad that flies die when they smell it!” Moon told him. The sun guard put his hand up to his mouth and his face turned bright red. “Wow!” Someone said. Moon turned around to look at a boy with white hair with bangs covering his eyes a little bit. His eyes were dark green. Dark green eyes were so rare so were purple eyes the rare eyes usually were in the royal family. “WHAT?!” Moon asked. “You stood up to the guard!” He told her. “And you are…?” “Astro!” He said. “Okay and?” “No Moon person ever stood up to a guard like that except for my mother Queen Luna but she’s dead now. But some say she’s still alive, that she survived and is looking for her two daughters and son!” “Who’s the two daughters?” Moon asked.  “No one really remembers.” “Queen Sunshine will visit you next Moonbeam come along!” Queen Sunshines assistant told her. “Bye nice meeting you!” Astro said. 

The sun palace was huge. There was a lava fountain in the entryway. The walls were made out of cobblestone and there was some oak wood on some parts. Outside there were a lot of foxes and some oak trees. 

The guards and Moon walked upstairs to Queen Sunshine’s throne room. Moon's hands were starting to hurt from the chains. She walked into the throne room and standing in front of her was Queen Sunshine. She had light blue eyes and blonde hair in curls. “Ah princess Moonbeam, glad to see you come in.” “What do you want?” “Nothing, just the Moon star.” “Oh and to kill queen Luna.” “but you-” “Oh yes I did too bad it was your mother.” “Wait what?” “Oh Moonbeam you really didn’t think that her sister was her mother oh how very stupid of you.” “But my sister.” “Lied to you.” “You're the one lying you good for nothing scoundrel!” “Oh, Moonbeam I’m not.” This means Queen Luna has been alive this whole time no one told me. So, this means Astro is my brother. “Moonbeam Luna was your mother.”      




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