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To be carried out after my current story and during/after A Choice of Hope.

Thus is a PT, or psychological thriller. It messes with your mind!

 

Chapter 1

The sense of darkness closed itself willingly over my ears. I massaged my ears reluctantly and shook my head. I  opened my eyes to the sight of padded floors and people as they participated in a mock fight. I felt hollow. I wanted to fight, i wanted to bring myself into that world of color and freedom...
But then the dominate her shook off the feeling.
"No." the superior her said swiftly. "You aren't allowed."
What does she mean by that? I am an inferior. Another soul in her body. So, two souls in one body, really. I am the lesser. I can feel and taste and see but I can't control what I feel and taste and see. She does. I can tell her I want to see the people fighting, but she says she doesn't want to. It's boring, she says. I have been trying to break free for years, to be my own person, but I'm afraid that since I don't have another body to house me, I'll just be another servant or just disappear.
Either way, I'm trapped.



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All I can say is






WOW. scream-feargrin

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That was really good. dolphin-swim

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