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Ok, so this takes place after star allies.(which I'll make soon), return to Dreamland, and Kirby saves the universe. A lot of books have a story about the badguy so here we are. So let's get this started. In Kirby saves the universe Marx got blasted far away. Months later he woke up in a forest. Remembering what Kirby did, he got up and wanted revenge, but first wanted a snack. Fortunately, there were fruits all over this forest. Unfortunately, Marx didn't like health food. We never went over this before but he was evil because no one gave him a snickers chocolate bar. He went back to civilization to rob a candy store or 2. Meta Knight was watching this happen. After Marx robbed the second one, metaknight fled to Kirby's house."Kirby, remember Marx?""that guy who's butt got kicked a few months ago? Yeah."''hes back."" Marx is back!"" Yup. And he wants revenge."" I should go fight him.""No!""Why?""Galacta Knight is traveling here from space and he's a bigger threat then even Marx. You should go up and fight him. He'll land on top of nuttey noon which is right below the edge of the atmosphere. You should go there and wait for him. Marx will try to get there. Well hold him of." So Kirby went behind castle dedede which was were nutty noon was and started climing. Castle dedede let Kirby through, but not Marx. Marx was chasing down Kirby and had to get through the castle and was to dumb to go around. Marx was yelling at the guards." I just want to go through the back door so I can get to nutty noon.""how many times do I have to tell you, your not allowed in the castle!" Marx grabbed a blade and threatened the guard. "Let me in!" The guard grabbed a spear and threatened Marx."No." Marx shoved the guard aside and walked in he couldn't even get into the throne room without being attacked before he could go in waddle Dee got in the way. Marx smirked. This would be to easy"step aside, before any one gets hurt.""I say nay you......" Before waddle Dee could finish, Marx used black magic to lift him up and toss him aside. Marx walked in to not see dedede in the throne, but metaknight! "You're not going anywhere criminal scum!" He said. He grabbed his sword. Marx grabbed his blade they duelled. 60 seconds into the battle Marx teleported behind metaknight and kicked him to the ground. He threw metaknight in the trash can. Before he could walk out the back door a hammer was thrown into Marx's face. Marx recovered to see the king. Dedede gave Marx a beat down until he made a sick face. Dedede fights with honor so he stopped. That was a big mistake. Marx threw up a giant laser which blasted dedede across the castle. He finally walked out the back door. Meta Knight called Magolor. "Yes?""Magolor go to the balcony under the roof in nutty noon, Marx is chasing down kirby in there right this second!"" Got it!" Magolor created a portal there asap. He knew that one day this fight will come.



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