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All abored! Captain Corks bellowed.

I have ben on this ship four days. I have never seen a rock as big as I am sawing now. Its big. brown and green stalks are everywhere! I anhead I see a brown box. Its so big, people ara going in there! Cork wants us to go on the large rock and go I  the box. i do no want to leave my shep. Likey I said, I have been here four thrae days.

 

  I walk on to the stars where it reaches the top of the rock.

WHAAM! I hit the roack with a thud. Thomas, he was ben here! He walks aruind! The ground itn't rockigh! Tgish ish't a roack! Its America!




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this was the first story I ever wrote. You can tell, how far I've come with the DANGER OVER THE WALLS. I just wanted to thank everyone for reading my stories and hanging in there!

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All abored! Captain Corks bellowed.

I have been on this ship for days. I have never seen a rock as big as I am seeing now. Its big, brown and has green stalks everywhere! Ahead I see a brown box. Its so big, people are going in there! Cork wants us to go on the large rock and go in the box. I do not want to leave my ship. Like I said, I have been here for three days.

 

I walk on to the stairs where it reaches the top of the rock.

WHAM! I hit the rock with a thud. Thomas, he has been here! He walks around! The ground isn't rocky! That isn't a rock! Its America!

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great!



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