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Heroing was harder than doog thought it would be. He literally had to be a ninja. Every one was corrupted so he had to sneak even to get 5 inches. Soon he got to the city. going in it was his worst mistake thus far. Fortunately, he was able to blend in. He just walked through. Now here is the mistake: he decided to get a quick ice cream for the road. He just walked in there. Every one was just standing mindless saying duh and stuff like that. once he got an ice cream, A bunch of stick people started to chase him. He ran into town Punching his way through. Suddenly, All the people he was fighting used Karate moves. A bunch of people punched him to the ground. when he got up, he noticed that no one was punching him. They were just standing in a circle around doog. 2 people scooted to the side to show dabyug.

"Well,Well,Well. I knew i couldn't Corrupt everyone. I can see into your mind DOOG. that is your name correct?" Doog was suprised. he could see into his mind. "So, You were sent by that wrecthed flame  to stop me? That's a shame." Doog foolishly ran towards Dabyug. "YOU JERK!!!!!!" He tried to punch him, But dabyug Ducked and knocked him over. Then he took out his Black blade. "I'm Thinking I won't corrupt you but kill you instead. Then They heard a bunch of Punching noises. All of the corrupted were beat up on the floor. "What?" said dabyug. Then, A smoke bomb came and doog felt something grab him he suddenly noticed He Was running with some people. Non corrupted people. They outran Dabyug, Who was triggered by the way. There was nothing he could do. He didn't even know were they were. Doog found himself in a campsite. He was with a bunch of (Non corrupted) people. the leader came. "do not worry. we welcome you. My name is Kalub, Leader of the Survivors. We  found you and decided to save your butt." "thanks man." "you're welcome. Now come, we have to stop Dabyug. But first, we may have a dinner." "it's okay. I already got mine." He held out his ice cream.



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