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at this point brittany may or may not have developed some sense of self-awareness, and could possibly be exploiting her built-in plot armor
enjoy a not-koppaite chapter while i try to figure out how to progress the plot
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Chapter 23
Meanwhile, on the other side of the planet...
"Louie, let go of that treasure. We're not supposed to be eating that."
Olimar buried his face in his hands, exasperated. Louie, his glutton of a colleague, tightly hugged the side of a dessert treasure. Though he, too, wanted nothing more than to give it a taste, he knew better than to send back something half-eaten - it meant shaming, lectures, and pay cuts.
And yet he wouldn't budge, opting to glare at his Captain before opening his mouth and trying to take a bite out of it.
"Oh, no, you don't!" Olimar snapped, stepping forward and yanking him down by the leg. He collapsed on the floor and muttered something incomprehensible before walking away.
Sighing, he turned and stared out the window at where the Planet Hocotate would be. His wife and kids were there right now, waiting for his return. Hopefully, this huge debt would move on soon, and they'd be able to return home, see their families again.
"Alright," he said, booting up the ship's location selector and swiping to an unexplored area. It looked somewhat like an ancient stump in a barren land. "This is the place we're searching in tomorrow. Got any problems?"
"Actually, yes."
He started. Louie spoke so little, it always came as a bit of a shock whenever the younger Hocotatian actually said something. "Hm? What's wrong with this place?"
"I'm... not sure," he mumbled. "But I'm not getting good feelings about that place. Can't we... look somewhere else?"
On second thought, this place WAS quite creepy-looking... but neither could afford to leave anything behind. "That's not going to stop us. Besides, it's just be for a day or two. What could go wrong?"
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
